Tuesday, 2 July 2019

Nightmare Land Returns


Water is slowly running down a long magical river. A white barn owl is perched on a tall magical tree. Unicorn twins are grazing on the vibrant green grass. A dragon is quietly sleeping in his grey rocky cave. Swoosh! The Owl quickly and quietly swooped down from her perch in the tall magical tree and landed on a small rock on the mossy floor. She made sure it was alright. Found some wriggly worms and started eating them. When she swallowed the wriggly worms she heard something behind her. Crack! She hooted with alarm. Something by her startled her. She jerked and looked to where it came from. But she saw nothing but a broken stick on the mossy floor. So she went back to eating.

Splash! It came from the long magical river. But when she looked it was not the same as last time. See saw something emerging from the darkness. When it came into the moonlight she knew what it was. It was a slimy stinky zombie from Nightmare Land. She woke up dragon and stopped the unicorns twins from grazing.

“Everyone hop on Dragons back!” Owl said. ”Dragon, follow me to Wolf Boy and Wolf Girls house, Now!”Then the unicorn twins both jumped quickly onto Dragon’s back and he flew to Wolf Boy and Wolf Girls house.

When they got to the house they were breathless.

”I saw a zombie from Nightmare Land.” Puffed Owl. ”So we came to you because you know a lot about zombies from Nightmare land.”

Wolf Boy gave everyone a comfy seat each.

”Whoa, whoa, woah! Calm down Owl!” Wolf Girl said. “Where did you see it?” Owl calms down.

”Near long the magical River”Wipered Owl

Dragon gave a suggestion. ”We could find out what they eat and drag it back into Nightmare land.” Wolf Girl looked surprised.

”That's exactly what I was thinking!” Wolf Girl said. ”Good thing I know exactly what they eat. Rubbish but who has some?”

Dragon put up his hand.”I do! I have loads!” Dragon shouted and zipped to his grey rocky cave and back.”Do you have string?” Asked Dragon.

”Of course! Here!” Said Wolf Girl handing Dragon the string. Wolf Girl tied all the rubbish together and Wolf Boy took it down to the long magical river and dragged it back into Nightmare Land came back.

”Well done!” Said the Unicorn twins and Owl.

Owl and Dragon closed the gate to Nightmare Land and flew everyone back to the enchanted forest where they would be safe. Everything was back to normal ... Well it was for now.




2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Kylah,
    I like the way you use descriptive language like "hooted", "breathless", "emerging from the darkness". This is very powerful language.
    You look very proud and pleased of your work in the photo.
    I notice that when you completed improving this post you were commenting on other student's blogs. I also noticed that you have written postive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Ka pai to mahi.
    from Mrs Torri

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  2. Hello Kylah i am Tiarna i go to waitohu school i am 9 years old.
    Wow Kylah i like your story that had unicorns in it. I like unicorns and drawing.
    You your a amazing story writer
    Could you add more information about your drawing. I love drawing.

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