Lilys Finger - The Limerick - Summer Learning Journey Wha Tekau Ma Wha

Today I got a comment from Naomi who is from Manaiakalani. She said I should turn my Clerihew about my sister into a Limerick. In my Limerick, I say it was fixed by a doctor named Billy, but It was not actually fixed by a doctor named Billy the name just rhymed.

A limerick is usually funny and a bit rude. They have five lines with a rhyme scheme of AABBA, in which the first, second and fifth lines rhyme, while the third and fourth lines are shorter and share a different rhyme.

I enjoyed making it a bit funnier because it was scary at the time but we can laugh about it now that it is back on. I did not find anything tricky. I thought this task was really fun and I did not find anything tricky.

Thank you for reading my blog. Here is my Limerick:

My Sisters Finger

This week for writing we have been learning how to use a hook to grab the reader's attention. I chose to make a story about my sisters finger. In the holidays my sister was outside my room and me and my brother were inside. The door was open and my brother closed it. It turned out my sisters finger was in the hinges and it cut her left pinky. If you like the hook of my story comment for a part 2. Here is my story.

Slam!
'AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!'
My sisters finger was arched to the side like a bow. Her finger was a flopping bunny ear. One bloody bone poked out of her finger. Mum chucked her into the car.
VRRRM!
Off they went to the hospital.