Thursday, 13 May 2021
My Sisters Finger
This week for writing we have been learning how to use a hook to grab the reader's attention. I chose to make a story about my sisters finger. In the holidays my sister was outside my room and me and my brother were inside. The door was open and my brother closed it. It turned out my sisters finger was in the hinges and it cut her left pinky. If you like the hook of my story comment for a part 2. Here is my story.
Slam!
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