Tuesday, 14 September 2021

Why Mr Wolf is Guilty!

This week for writing we were learning how to Structure persuasive writing. We wrote about why Mr Wolf from little red riding hood and 3 little pigs needs to go to jail. We had to put 3 arguments why is is guilty of murder.

I learnt that a wolf lives for 16 years. I put this among my number one reason why he is guilty. I also learnt that people have made remakes of famous stories and one is here. It is called Red, the pig and the automobile.

My favourite part was learning about the big bad wolf because he seemed to be in so many stories as the bad guy. He must be hogging the bad guy spotlight!

I found it tricky to know how to find much information about how long he would be in jail because on different sites it came up different things. So I found some that are the same on more sites then normal ones and put down those ones.

Next time I would add more reasons he is guilty because I had lots of reasons. I would also add more information because he is in so many stories!

Here is my writing:

Why Mr Wolf Is Guilty

I strongly believe that Mr Wolf from Little Red Riding Hood and The Three Little Pigs is guilty because he Impersonated someone he killed, he threatened to eat 3 pigs and he broke into two houses. He should be in jail for the rest of his life!

Firstly, He impersonated someone he killed. He ate little Red Riding Hoods grandma and dressed up like her to make the little red riding hood think she is safe to approach. That is 10 years. Wolves live for 16 so he will be in there for most of his life.

Secondly, He threatened to eat three pigs. He also blew down their house to get to them. This caused a large amount of damage to their houses. For threatening cannibalism it is 14 years Jail time.

Thirdly, He broke into two peoples houses. He broke into Little Red’s grandma's house and the pig that built the brick house. For breaking and entering the house’s he needs to give $1000 dollars to each of the owners of the houses. 

In conclusion, I strongly believe that Mr Wolf is guilty because he Impersonated someone he killed, He threatened to eat 3 pigs and he broke into two houses. All the years and money together is 24 years and $2000 paid. He would be dead by the time he was allowed to get out!

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