Dancing Through the Evening

Today I was learning how to describe and use a hook. I had no idea how to spell Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious because it was not in a dictionary.
I enjoyed learning some of my speed.
I found it easy to write a hook.
I found it tricky to use similes.
Next time I would use more verbs.
My digital learning object shows that I can use a hook.

Here is my story
Dancing Through the Evening
Glowing lights blurred my view as the song Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious started playing. As quick as a jet Nikki ( my tap dance teacher ) gave me a what to do list for every single tiny week! Check the list to see it says new speed under week 3 which was next week! I was so excited that I screamed as loud as a screeching budgie. Group friends covered their ears. She finally got me to stop as we learnt the first move. I was sweating as much as a dog drools. Yelling over the music I yelled “WOW this is FAST!” Accidentally I left my tap shoes on a bench. While Nikki was trying to get me back I was already zooming through the rocks near the car. Mum started the car and we drove off to pick up my sister at Dancefit.