Wednesday, 13 May 2020

Grandma's Teeth

Today I was learning how to write a mystery story. We got to choose from 3 scenarios or make up our own. I chose to make up my own. I did it about a grandma losing her teeth and the suspects all had something in common with another one. I made the teacher love coffee based on my actual teacher.
I found it easy to make some funny bits like when grandma falls asleep.
I found it tricky to think of some suspects like the superheros.
My digital learning object shows that I can write a mystery story.

On a cold icy day you get a text from Grandma saying “Someone stole my teeth! Please come over and investigate!” You put on your coat and drive to her place. 


When you get there you see spiderwebs everywhere, a hole in the wall the size of a huge fist and you almost slipped on the coffee. 

Your suspects are Spiderman, Wreck it Ralph, Hulk or Mrs Naden (Your teacher who loves coffee). 

You ask your grandma how many people there were. She said two but she could not see their faces. Then you ask how the spiderwebs got there. Grandma says she never cleans her roof so they were almost everywhere. “ So that crosses off Spiderman “ You whisper while crossing his name off some paper. Next you ask “Do you know what colour they were?”. She says one looks a bit sick and green and the other looked normal. “Ok so definitely Hulk.” You say while circling his name and putting a green tick near it. “Ok Grandma, last question, do you know the haircolor of the normal looking one?”. It takes a while because in the middle of you asking that question she falls asleep. She finally says “Oh, yes! I remember now! The normal looking one had blonde hair!”.

You are very excited and thank grandma for her time. You know who stole her teeth now! It was Hulk and Mrs Naden! 

You drive to Avengers Tower HQ first. You sneak to Hulks room. No sign of them. 

Next you go to Mrs Nadens house. You see her drinking coffee ( like usual ) and see next to her Grandma's teeth! You ask why she has them. “I don’t know. Here you can have it.” Wow that was easy. You run back to Grandma's house forgetting about your car and give her the teeth. 

Then you get a big shock. You lost your car!

2 comments:

  1. Hyvää päivää Kylah,
    This story made me laugh, especially the bit about me drinking coffee. I'm also pleased to be friends with Hulk. I wonder why I would have stolen your grandmother's teeth. Maybe there was an infinity stone disguised as a tooth!
    Mā te wā,
    Mrs Naden

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  2. Hi Kylah that made me laugh when i was reading it at school the part that made me laugh was that MRS NADEN! was in there i enjoyed reading it
    Mat te wa
    Ocean-Jade

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