Friday, 18 December 2020

Song Chorus: Stay Strong

Today for my summer learning journey I had to write a chorus for a song.
It is about how even through Covid 19 we are strong.
I liked writing the story because it was the easiest bit.
It was hard to make it rhyme because I thought It will not be right if i didn't.
Here is my song:



2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Kylah,

    My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

    This was a very well written song that I am sure everyone will be able to relate to due to the effects of COVID. Your song is positive and shares a sense of community during those troubling times.

    To step up your post you could consider including a video of you reading or even singing your song!

    Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Zana Yates

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  2. Kia ora Kylah,
    I agree with Zana - it would be good to hear the rhythm and tune of the song.
    Do you think you could add a video in?
    from Mrs Torrie

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